MY FIRST DAILY DEVIATION!
I couldn't believe when I logged on this morning that I received a DD
When I wrote this poem, I thought to myself, "Wow, you should really stick to prose."
I'm glad that someone doesn't
Special thanks to ^Beccalicious
for featuring me, and thank you
ing, commenting, or reading!
I MADE IT THROUGH AUDITIONS!
I'm one of 50
writers chosen to participate in the Scratch That Poetry Tournament
. I am so
My first poem in ages!
This is my audition
's Scratch That Poetry Tournament
. As the rules stated, the participants could write about anything
overly depressing subject matter
This piece was greatly inspired by the ballet, Swan Lake
. I have just recently re
fallen in love with it while doing research for my NaNoWriMo '12
project, Drowning Sirens
I wanted to tell a story that may have seemed sad at first but in the end had a childlike sense of retribution that not only teaches all of us a lesson but gives everyone that isn't
necessarily a swan
Please let me know what you think. I'd love some feedback on this.
, & Credit for the preview image goes to =TheGalleryOfEve. Please the original preview image at their deviation, Good moments together
How do you feel about my imagery?
Did the pacing go wrong at any point?
Do you like the story in general?
Should I have tried to rhyme this?