My fifth entry into the poetry tournament...
This is my
entry for the
fourth round of #
poetry-book's
Scratch That Poetry Tournament. As the rules stated, the participants could write about something
jurassic... without including
overly depressing subject matter.
The theme for this round was
Jurassic. Deliciously fun, as alway!
In conjecture, however; the piece had to be written as an
acrostic limerick as well.
Growing up - my favorite dinasaour was the T-Rex. He's just a badass... except for his baby arms.
Those damn lemurs show no mercy.
Please let me know what you think. I'd love some feedback on this.
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Sta.sh
its good enough.
First off I would just say that the poem itself is interesting. Not very often does one expect to critique a limerick. Though it all comes down to whether or not it can be changed and molded into a seemingly complete poem with limited possibilities of beginnings. This is clever yet complete. The topic itself is uncommon and random yet it's well formatted.
Also the fact that the word used is short, which makes it more difficult, though I am amused by how you brought it full circle by concluding the limerick word in your actual poem. Very nice!
Creative idea, and good job!
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